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Open Poetry #3

Loud why, small cry

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-10-03 10:11 PM

Loud why, small cry

Old poems form new mulch
Tallow candles light.
New image enhance
Old stories', bright.

The crystal ball blinds
The pen in replay.
Eyes torn with litter,
Glitter old decay.

Loud why,
Small cry.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-03 10:14 PM

Very minimalist! I like your style Seymour, I really do. This has great imagery.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-10-04 02:10 PM

Severn,
Thank you for the read and comment.

Sunshine

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3 posted 1999-10-04 03:06 PM

This is great!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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4 posted 1999-10-04 08:51 PM

Very good! So few words saying so much!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-10-04 09:12 PM

Sunshine and Denice,
Your comments were welcome and I thank you.

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