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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
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glendale,ca.

0 posted 1999-10-03 07:40 PM


Your beautiful smile, gentle kiss and tender -heart,
Have not dissapeared forever. We will never fall apart,
In my heart we will always be together.

You might meet someone new,
She might seem like the one.
But soon she'll make you blue,
Know to me you can always run.

I've learned to look in your eyes,
I know when you've lied,
Or at night you've done nothing but cried.

You might not admit to this,
But I know you still love me.
I can tell by the way you kiss,
Someday together again we'll be.

When this day turns into night
I'll wish on my star,
That you could hold me tight,
And it'll reply you can't-you've gone far.

I don't know what else to say,
I just needed you to know I care.
For now I'll go away,
When you need me I'll be there.


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miriam coronado



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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-03 08:47 PM


I hope this all sorts out for you Miriam...nice work.
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-10-03 10:38 PM


Wonderfully done..I too hope that whatever is going on works out for you.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-04 12:30 PM


Miriam, this is lovley and sad, I too hope it all works out for you and you no longer have to feel the pain

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
4 posted 1999-10-04 02:04 PM


Severn, Alwye, Dark Angel...thank you.
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