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Returning of A Love
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Returning of A Love |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Returning of A Love He sits there praying to be found by someone other than himself. He loved her beyond the earth which no words could desrcibe. He walks here roaming the lands that he once roamed with her. He lies under the stars of heaven hoping for the return of his love. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) [This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done! So much meaning portrayed with so few words! I love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lynn: If only.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lonely and Lovely! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Good one Lynn...looking forwad to more and welcome to the group ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
For me, you touched a tender cord... loved it |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Lynn, I can relate to this one. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lynn, this is lovley, sad but lovley ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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