Open Poetry #3 |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
PEOPLE Some people ask no questions. Some people are always right. Some people spend their whole life guessing, And they'll probably never see the light. Some people live in anger. Some people die in vain. Some people see no danger. Some people feel no pain. Some people will walk the street, Even as darkness paints the sky. Some people have the world at the edge of their feet, But they never have the courage to fly. Some people hold a poison pen. Some people speak with a forked tongue. Some people are afraid of growing old, And they never enjoy it while they're young. Some people watch the world through blinds, Some people flow in and out with the tide. Some people are caged within their own minds. Some people just live on pride. Some people can hear the angels voice, Even as thunder rolls across the sky. And all people are born with wings of choice, Everyone of us could learn to fly.... If we only had the courage to try. ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Excellent message...well done, and welcome to Passions ![]() ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is marvelous! A message that many of us need to hear. Welcome to the family! (Note: Be careful on your job!) ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a great piece, DO! Packed with truth! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Words of wisdom, DO. Like it! ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I get the feeling this was written with a smirk, but I see a very serious message beneath the surface. Some very true words here, good job. Michael |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This is absolutely thought-provoking. I love 'born with wings of choice' ... ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I like this VERY much ! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Great message....Excellent piece... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
I really loved this ! ------------------ Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the perspective |
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