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Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-11-08 05:36 PM


I have often spent the time
on a rather rainy day,
thinking about hoospasa.
A term I use for,
deadbeats or Gods
from the net.
Hoospasa,
is the middle,
the decision,
the uncertainty.
When he says,
I am built like adonis,
cry like a woman,
and will watch romantic movies,
I say hmmmm...could it be?
Hoospasa I say!
Begone 'til I hear more.
Or he may say,
I know you're single,
we could meet here or there,
in the garden,
I'll nair your hair,
Hoospasa I say,
Begone, I'll hear no more.
The lie, the truth,
I do not know,
hoospasa I say,
I choose not to know,
hoospasa,
hoospasa,
blah!


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Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-08 09:11 PM


Hoospasa! I like that word! And I enjoyed this littel poem! Cute!

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-11-08 09:50 PM


(with apologies to Connie Francis!)

Hoospasa! Now?
Hoospasa! Now?
Hoospasa's aching
for breaking each vow?

LOL.......you wrote a cute poem, unusual title......

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-09 02:03 PM


Enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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