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Open Poetry #3

Limitations Of Love?

LRAW
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 15

0 posted 1999-11-08 01:21 PM

I hate to say it,
but I wish she were dead
she's made me a circus
with the words from her head.
We had it so nice;
so quiet and sweet.
Though our love was quite real
she took bodies; just us two.
But she let me go out
and enjoy quite a few.

But baby's gone and blown her top
and spread the word around the block.
She's told Big Joe and Sweet Lorraine
that my desires are society's bane.
But I just say I'm open minded;
Nothing wrong with two things.
Though I should have never told her then
had I known the pain that it brings

I guess she hated it,
the whole damn time.
But because of our love
She said it was fine.
I like both types
and I like to be free

So at night I would roam,
she claimed to be serene
Well, I needed both types
and I loved my two scenes
But when I told her some names
she desposed of my dream

A name she made love to
from many years ago.
Was now in my life
she could take it no more

So baby's gone and blown her top
and spread the word around the block.
She's told Big Joe and Sweet Lorraine,
that my desires are society's bane.
But I just say I'm open minded;
Nothing wrong with two things.
Though I should have never told her then,
had I known the pain that it brings.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-08 02:25 PM

Enjoyed the read.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

LenMcC1
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 68

2 posted 1999-11-09 08:55 PM

interesting poem, do you really like both types?

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