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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
the present and it all started with a kiss and the buttons of her dress, that his fingers brushed and then couldn't leave... well, no, I can't say that for it started long ago... a word seen on a screen pulled her to him, or was it him to her? a simple post and a laugh and he was gone. just a few keyboard clicks, it could be said, but it was oh so much more. his name alone made her lips curl in delight her mind filled with wonder at the man behind the name, each day bringing only more more of him and more of wanting. she opened her soul, herself and her all to him, a friend, and only a friend she swore against all the hurts from before. but finding acceptance from the inside out and with faltering steps closer to love she tripped and found a heart like none before. with his keyboard touches he touched her here he touched her there caressed her like no other his words sliding into around and in between resist him she could not. a day, one day, they did steal a gift of each other, this present they did entrust. his lips met hers with a passion long denied. his words now, he made come true he was no writer of lies. fingers entwine for a moment only then travel every inch lips tenderly explore, only clothing now restricts and her buttons he does softly touch, a question in his eyes. permission not needed they both knew the answer, but asked because of the man he is. a silent blink yes ribbons untied, wrapping removed and cast to the floor two bodies mesh...two souls meld ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, Lovey.... glad you finally posted it! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: *sigh*...Eloquent! HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
watcher  thankssuthern, yep, finally got the nerve or to be more exact, remembered where I saved it lolol thanks rainbow girl *sigh* on this side too, thank you |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And as the hair upon her chest, brushed against his own, Soon their souls and bodies meshed, Toerag had that granny all alone!!! Nice poem dear, well done!!! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
absolutely ROFG@And as the hair upon her chest, brushed against his own, thanks toe for the compliment and the smile |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes tis' very lovely indeed Iloveit.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
I liked this one alot. Beautiful ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pushes my buttons ! Nicely done. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Pepper, Dreadead one, Marge thanks glad you liked it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautiful and sensual |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks martie sensual is fantasy for me lately lol, but glad I achieved it in this poem |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
ribbons untied, wrapping removed and cast to the floor ... so vivid ... a passionate poem Lovey ... well done .. I wish you'll steal that day |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
me too, me too....thanks jtf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat piece! |
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