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My daughter Faun
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My daughter Faun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My daughter faun Named my daughter after a fawn, Looked as pretty when she was born. Each time she stands within my sight, The time rolls back in sheer delight A conjured glean a passing dream, A parents ever loving theme. Forever a child to my eye, Her childhood never said goodbye. Although an adult now, quite grown With lovely children of your own. A mother and a known trustee Yet to my eyes you still show three. Sorry dear this gullible brew, My mind does hold you in this view. Though getting old I'm not senile. You'll ever show this loving wile. I ask you let the judgement wait I'm sure in time, you will relate. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Seymour. You take my breath away. I understand so well this sentimant. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very heartwarming....loved this Sy! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lovely thoughts, Seymour. Time marches on until the magic of our camera comands .. Halt ! Then time stands still as we flip through the Rolodex of memories. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you for the understanding. Pepper, Glad you warmed to this poem. Marge, Lots of memories to roll through, thanks for the read. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sey, another good'n! Funny how they seem to stay the same sweet age in our minds eye. Very touching! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sweet, Seymour. I can so well relate to this one too!  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove, That's true, thanks for the good'n. Denice, Your relating to this one was a nice compliment. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful, they may be grown but in the heart they will always be our babies. A lifetime of beautiful memories to revisit and relive anytime, can't think of anything nicer!! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Isis, Yes they are and will, thank you for the read and comment. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
She is certainly worthy of a poem in her honor. Nice, Sy. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Wow Sy! What a lovely tribute to your daughter! Very sweet. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply lovely..timeless.Loved this. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bal, Mike, sally and Watcher, I left the sight to go to the loo. Came back and found my poem on page two. Thank you all for the boost back. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, children. Well done, sir. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, you were in the loo for 10 hours and 42 minutes? We gotta talk! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Children, that says it all *L* Balladeer, You may have run out of things to write about, but your humor is as sharp as ever. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm sure she is beautiful |
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