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Poet deVine
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0 posted 1999-08-15 09:33 PM


Another challenge phrase from a friend: Write a poem using "the three moons of Mur"


Luminescent white orbs glowing
shining on black water flowing
taking time to reach the sea
slowing moving outwardly.

Green shadows on the water’s edge
nature’s moving night time hedge
moon glow bright as days first light
Mur is lovely in it’s night.



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Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-15 09:54 PM


How lovely - envisioning the moonlight shining on the sea - Very nice, deVine...
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2 posted 1999-08-15 10:25 PM


Very very beautiful, Ms. deVine..

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3 posted 1999-08-16 12:42 PM


OOOOh, I really really liked this...."black waters & green shadows" made this a hit with me!! I'm big on GOOD words....

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4 posted 1999-08-16 03:12 AM


Is there no end to your talent ms deVine?
I swear I'm going to burst with envy!

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[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-16-99).]

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5 posted 1999-10-20 12:26 PM


I thought this was worthy to be brought back...I missed it the first time around....I love the imagery...and the nightime magic this portrays! Very lovely indeed ! ***curtsies

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6 posted 1999-10-20 12:44 PM


Wow! I missed it, too, and it is very, very beautiful.
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7 posted 1999-10-20 07:26 AM


PDV: Fabulous!

HUGS

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8 posted 1999-10-20 09:48 AM


WOW! Loved this!

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9 posted 1999-10-20 10:56 AM


Stunning!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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10 posted 1999-10-20 11:55 AM


PDV..how well you stood up to the challange, this is a most beautiful piece of writing
Poet deVine
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11 posted 1999-10-20 04:31 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments! I am a bit surprised this got resurrected! I didn't consider it worthy, only posted at a time when the brain wouldn't get into gear. I do so appreciate your words though! Thanks.

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