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Three Moons of Mur
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Three Moons of Mur |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Another challenge phrase from a friend: Write a poem using "the three moons of Mur" Luminescent white orbs glowing shining on black water flowing taking time to reach the sea slowing moving outwardly. Green shadows on the water’s edge nature’s moving night time hedge moon glow bright as days first light Mur is lovely in it’s night. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How lovely - envisioning the moonlight shining on the sea - Very nice, deVine...  |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very very beautiful, Ms. deVine..  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
OOOOh, I really really liked this...."black waters & green shadows" made this a hit with me!! I'm big on GOOD words....  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Is there no end to your talent ms deVine? I swear I'm going to burst with envy! ------------------ It's so cool, it's so swell, living here on Ice Planet hell! -Psychotica- [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-16-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I thought this was worthy to be brought back...I missed it the first time around....I love the imagery...and the nightime magic this portrays! Very lovely indeed ! ***curtsies ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow! I missed it, too, and it is very, very beautiful. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: Fabulous! HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
WOW! Loved this! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Stunning! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PDV..how well you stood up to the challange, this is a most beautiful piece of writing  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind comments! I am a bit surprised this got resurrected! I didn't consider it worthy, only posted at a time when the brain wouldn't get into gear. I do so appreciate your words though! Thanks.  |
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