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See the Sea
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See the Sea |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
All dressed in white, It's head a'beam, The lighthouse, you and me, We all hold hands, Our souls together, Watching the rolling sea. Looking out west, Where sky and sea rhyme, You and me, the moon mirrored night White caps come in to rest, Surveying the tides and times. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe this was a calming peaceful piece! Nice! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Toerag...I love your funny side,but your serious side, well I'm just in awe.This is absolutely beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful!!! I could hear the waves crashing... feel the salt spray!!! Thank you, Toe... this is absolutely lovely! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You painted a beautiful picture with this one. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You never fail to amaze me Sir Toe. Well done.  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply beautiful Toe! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thank you all..... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Toe: I'd sure like to be at one with the sea... HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thank you brit...and all...have a great weekend to everyone...... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Really beautiful Toe, well Done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice work, ole man river. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Say, Toesie, this is a truly lovely poem! I felt that I was there too. You certainly are versatile! Thank you for sharing such beautiful visions and feelings. ------------------ ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Absolutely enchanting, dear Toerag ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting, indeed! Good job, Toe! ------------------ Denise |
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