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fatwah Junior Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 16 |
dead in the street dying in heat waiting for the sun waiting for the gun smile girl, my world hoping for release hoping for some peace screaming, crying waiting, dying dead on her feet she is dead in the street she's alive in my mind but she's dead |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So powerful, fatwah~I like the way this was written. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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fatwah Junior Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 16 |
ah thankyouverymuch |
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