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mia
Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-11-03 10:22 PM


you speak love
I feel hurt
you promise more
than what you give
and I linger
to the thought of letting me
loose you
I know you love
but this love that you feel
it's not the one that I want

I need soft
I need calm
I need true emotion
every time you kiss me

be my prince
and stop laughing at me
It's not funny
anymore

© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-11-03 10:56 PM


very sad mia
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-04 02:37 AM


Heartfelt emotion,well done!

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