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Sonnets to a Rose... continued
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Sonnets to a Rose... continued |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Fair Rose, thou beauty comes in still of night, And touches on mine heart as gentle breeze, Unto mine soul, thou beauteous charms requite, As thou doth calm within my raging seas, Thou art lustre of midsummer's moon, Sweet welkin charms that rise as day doth sleep, With thoughts of scented bloom, I e'er shall swoon, For in mine heart, fore'er thy love shall keep. From passion's cup, of thee I do imbibe, Thy nectar sweet, mine yearning deep doth sate, Thou lover's quill, doth on mine heart inscribe, Eternal love, as for the night I wait, Fair Rose, I sing unto the god's above, For Luna's light, hath brought immortal love. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh Yeah.... This works for me...   |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Move over Nan, no Kidding, Mike, this is wonderful. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply beautiful Mike...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Well you got some nice responses. I'm not much for old english but i Liked this. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, yes, yes! You've done it again! Marvelous! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful......I guess I need to start writing mine ------------------ Alis volat propriis |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank ye all... Mr. Tabin, really appreciated your comment. I realize that this form isnt everyones cup of tea... but I am glad you saw the effort and enjoyed. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Absolutely Lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank ya kindly Watcher. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Very well done. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Glad you liked the poem Martie... thanks for the comment. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
exquisite!! It likes me much, it does... ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ah Mike, this is beautiful ! : ) |
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