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Gotta Have My Six Pack
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Gotta Have My Six Pack |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I can’t express my feelings. My stomach tightened at the sight. Memories flashed into my mind of long forgotten nights. I’ve sat here across this table every weekend now for years. Have told you that I love you with countless smiles and tears. This weekend visit differed then the others times before. I couldn’t stand the distance of this table anymore. I quickly moved beside you the closest we have been. To any kind of encounter since I can’t remember when. I felt my pulse quicken I couldn’t seem to breathe. Felt the warmth of closeness your hand upon my knee. Then you raised you shirt up I saw a flash of skin. You saw my cheeks darken and gave your crooked grin. I’ve always loved that six pack haven’t seen it in a while. Even now I can’t forget it as I sit here alone and smile. People do not understand why I would sit and wait. For a man who sits in prison behind an iron gate. I often ask that question sometimes I just don’t know. Until I feel you hold me close when its time for me to go. I can tell the world right now if I have to wait another year. They won’t find me home on Sundays, baby … I’ll be here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When you truly love someone, no wait is too long. *S* Wonderful poem, Lucie... even if I did think Fosters when I saw the title! LOL. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enkoyed the read....well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lucie - A love worth having - is worth waiting for.....  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, this is beautiful lucie |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
just remember that love will always last, no matter how long the wait. i'm glad you still have such a positive attitude, knowing long distance relationships are always more difficult to bare. good poem! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very touching Lucie....I hope your waiting will end soon...my heart goes out to you....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I hope you sent this poem to him, or better yet take it to him on Sunday. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe I thought you were talking Budweiser !!  I thought...uh oh...she's gone off the deep end, and gone and got herself all drunk !! LMAO Sorry, I like this much better though....you should hang on to a man with a stomach like that! There aren't many of those left !! hehe I've had dreams about stomach's like that....just dreams....hehe (sigh) ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching Lucie. I can feel the pain in this. ------------------ Denise |
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