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jay
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 1
Athens, AL, USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 01:08 AM


This is my poem to you

You turn my dark skies into blue
When I first met you I knew it was a clue...
that you were the woman, this I knew.

I don’t know how to tell you how much I care
but, for you I would do it all, even shave my hair.
Some days I wake up and all I can think is I wish I was there
instead of here away from you and I almost shed a tear.

I just wish that you were two years older.
For this I think that I could move a boulder.
But, no matter the age I will always lend you a shoulder,
even when the sunlight sheds and the night air gets colder.

Even though this poem I write is not long,
the love I feel for you is still just as strong.
I will always be here for you and never do you wrong.

I hope that this gives you pleasure and a laugh.
I still love you from your head to your calf.
I really think you are my better half.

I am that heat when you are cold.
I am the strength when you aren’t that bold.
I am the grip when you think you can’t hold...
on to anything other than your tabloid.

But for now I have to finish this poem and leave.
Just want you to know I feel like a majesty.
I love you and I hope you feel the same for me.

I love you.
I adore you.
I cherish you.

© Copyright 1999 jay - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-03 01:19 AM


Nicely done....Welcome

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