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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Smoky, musky sweet perfume Help me survive this lonely gloom Slim coated glistening walls Lonely voices echoes in the halls Entrapped in Darkness' tight embrace This mortal coil does through race Awaiting death at every door Fire licking every pore Shadows hide the truth inside Where Dragons heart did reside Alone and lonelier by far Sometimes wishing on a star Multiple hues of black and red Flank the trail of the dead Playing games upon my head Following to where I'll be lead At cemeteries gate the path ends After many perilous twists and bends Here lay the dead in repose So told the tale of each of those Marble stones at every turn Hell's flames do brightly burn Skin scorched, And soul torn Ah, plight of the forlorn ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very expressive - sure know that mood. Great work, Watcher. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Enjoyed this much Watcher..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Like it!! hmmm..I have a poem about folorned or something...I'll look it up and post ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wonderful, as usual ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A real mood poem. Very good. ------------------ Denise |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
your always there to compliment me so heres your kudos back great work man fire licking every pore =) love that |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
very familiar sentiments and feelings |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading.I appreciate your comments!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such good descriptions for when you feel like that!! Top stuff! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice read here watcher, thanks for posting |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very well written and expressed, Watcher! I know the mood too well also, my friend. Great visual expressiveness as well ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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russelle Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 21Chicago, Il. USA |
loved the imagery, great read |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
watcher, enjoyed this much, sigh, have felt this emotion too many times |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent! |
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