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handbagsatfiftypaces Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 12 |
always wanted to be in control. nothing new that day, but something grew that day, i felt it turn and twist and grab for more it's tiny hands rakingthrough my jealous thoughts and crying out for more my sickness, my distress, my watering eyes ad swelling breasts it hurt so much to set you free in a mad panic you conquered me and smashed me, like a crystal womb inside the belly of the earth |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
That last line is a winner...welcome to passions  |
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handbagsatfiftypaces Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 12 |
thankyou, hoot. i need all the encouragement i can get at the moment |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done.Enjoyed the read! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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