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~*~ You Float Away ~*~
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~*~ You Float Away ~*~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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** This is going to seem depressing, but it's not really meant to be....it's just the reality of a long-distance internet love... I sign off and you float away - I sit there and stare at the screen... This love seems to be just a dream. Our love is 2 world's far apart... You now hold the key to my heart - Long days turn to nights, oh so cold... Crawl in bed - I have no one to hold. Come to me tonight - meet me there... Leave behind all the burdens we bear - Take my hand - and let's disappear... from this world - let's fly far from here. Just a night with you in the stars... Visit Venus & Saturn & Mars - Ride a comet for Chris like he said... How euphoric - this dream in my head. We find a white castle up there... In the sky - so we stop just to stare - There on sand, with bare feet you kiss me... Our sea - of tranquility... We stop off to Waltz on the moon... The way you move - makes me swoon. You tenderly dip me with grace... I reach up my hand, touch your face. Strong arms lift me up higher still... As we dance, there upon luna's hill. Don't wake me - I want to stay here, In the arms of the one I hold dear.......... "Remember, I love you," I say... As I wake up & you float away - I lay there & stare at the screen... This love seems to be just our dream. ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This speaks volumes about your depths dear Lady, and says much about Michael's judgement as well. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, PFF! ------------------ Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
dear fem, Been there, done that... Very difficult, very rewarding, very hard for anyone else to fathom... Corinne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beauitful and so true, I dealt with this a little once myself  ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Very lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Dream, am I right to take that as a compliment or not ? (laughing nervously) You spoke of my "depths", however, this piece was written quite "simplistically".....hehe Just wondering - -  ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh, so very beautiful pFF....loved the imagery of this piece...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep loved this too, *sigh* it is beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pff, A dream made in cyber space heaven. You threw the dice and threw eleven. You won. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Femme this was fantastic! This was just so tender. (((((sigh))))) You guys will be together soon. I know its hard right now. Hang in there! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PFF....I can relate to this as so can many others. The distance between two hearts encompasses more than physical space. I know how it feels to feel that longing to be in that persons arms...sometimes the sheer magnitude is overwhelming |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Femme, this is a wonderful piece of poetry, I think, it shows how deep your feelings for Michael really are, it shows that you are human, just like us all, and also shows that you show more feeling, than most in this world!!! My dear friend femme all I can say is someday you will be with the one you hold dear, It will amaze you the distance love will span!!! Flowers to ya my friend. Richard [This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
The magic of love has no boundres as your words have shown truth to this fact This was beautiful Fatale!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your dreams are my dreams, Femme, and they can come true. Always remember, I love you. I am as honored by your poetry as I am by your love, thank you for sharing so much with me. I hope I haven't let you down, completely, some how. Michael |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
And it is beautifully expressed. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Amen |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
The farther the distance sometimes the stronger the love. This simple poem actually says a lot, sis. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you Richard, for the flowers...you brought a smile to my face once again...I needed that. ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, PFF! |
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