Open Poetry #3 |
Icicles |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Icicles It gave you pleasure Melting my resistance Shining in the sparkle You found in my eyes Twinkling treasure Partially hidden from view Wrapped in glossy paper You tore away Layers of ribbons tied I loved you Held this gift in your gaze Touched the outer layers Slipped inside skillfully Heat replaced the cold Closed my eyes, milky ways I have often wished upon you Like some far off star In the icy winter sky And I think to myself: Darlin’, if you only knew © August 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Nice....really beautiful.....LOL when I said keep 'em comin, I didn't mean so many at a time...i suppose you weren't told this yet, but it is generally frowned upon to post so much at a time...perhaps if you spent more time replying...personally, I post no more than one or two, sometimes three poems in a day-usually spread about in seperate forums. Perhaps try to get in at least 3 replies for every poem posted. (And that is an absolute minimum!) ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Corinne. ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
definitely beautiful..you're a welcome addition here. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Corinne....Truely beautiful! ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dear Systematic Decay, So sorry! I am a very literal person, and one with not much time, either, I'm afraid! So, I have posted several at a time, when I have the time... I have been posting commentary, but there are so many postings, it is hard to keep up. I will try to control my enthusiasm! Corinne |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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