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Two Hearts as One
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Two Hearts as One |
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Justina Junior Member
since 1999-10-31
Posts 24Kansas City. MO |
Two Special People One Special Day A Dream to Share A Long Life Away Two Hearts As One One Heart From Two A Special Dream Of Love Come True! [This message has been edited by Justina (edited 10-31-1999).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
very much to the point. good job! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short, sweet, not one wasted word |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Might I suggest "two hearts as one" instead of "heat"? lol good job! |
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Justina Junior Member
since 1999-10-31
Posts 24Kansas City. MO |
Thanks guys! Short, simple and right to the point! lol I am all about suggestion, so Please let me know if I ever need to edit or something! Also: PLEASE check out my poem titled: RONCHETTO!!! No one has yet and I want some feedback! Thanks =) Justina |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely!!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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