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Fear? |
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DramaMama Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 47Louisiana |
Fear? I fear nothing walking alone on a deserted street heels clicking on the pavement behind me not my own spiders in the woodpile disturbed by activity scurrying in fright or standing in defiance their defenses apparent shadows on the wall coat draped on a chair sinister intruder within tree branches in the wind lurking voyeur without broken railing on a bridge nothing beneath me that supports the idea of crossing car spread-eagled in air empty house anticipating an arrival that never comes silence spreading its muffled roar okay So I lied @ 10/17/99 Pat Hornsby Crochet |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Well written, imaginative, and gripping. Thanks for the read. dp  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good! I was carried along from beginning to end without a break! So smooth! Great ending too! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful ending to an already good piece |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Pat, so glad to see you here! As I said before, love this piece! Isn't this poetry group wonderful? Everyone is so postive and encouraging, I love it! Keep posting! Corinne |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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