Open Poetry #3 |
Fence Posts |
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Fence Posts In the field of my life a cultivated ground with memories of peaceful pasturage now turned under fertilized and pesticides profusely applied for the coming crops… there remains but one constant reminder of the beauty once contained within these boundaries. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So poignant, RobertB! I can definitely relate to this poem! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I liked this...original. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
original it was! Well said, liked it much! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I am a farmboy...and have seen many pastures turned under for crops...only fence posts remain as a reminder of the lush pasturage. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Robert, this is absolutely beautiful. Wonderfully written |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Lovely. Imagery, perfect! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good read! Enjoyed this one! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all got fence posts |
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