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Another Guy Stole My Man
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Another Guy Stole My Man |
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Lorelei Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23Philadelphia, PA |
I cling to a past that won't set me free, and they tell me tomorrow is another day. But how can I go on when you kept me all this time, and turned on me this way? I know I spent all my free time trying to hold on so that you might stay. When all you ever wanted to do was get yours and make me go my own way. My heart and my feelings were shattered. I new it was coming, but why today? You could have picked a better time than this, our wedding day. Supposed to be the happiest moment of my life... What did you expect me to say? That I don't mind, but you could've picked a better time to tell me you were gay. ~I was given the boot about 6 hours ago, and he couldn't even tell me. He had his sister tell me he was breaking up with me. The nerve! Anyone have any bitter women poems? If so, send them to me, my addy is ossa_rave@hotmail.com |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
All my hugs dear Lady. My own sister went through this, but she caught them in the act. I feel for you. Tell me what you require in a poem and you will have bitterness customed made for you. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Lorelei Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23Philadelphia, PA |
I require a poem that has an anti-men slogan at least one time. I seem to be going around in circles. The same thing happened to me this time last year, dumped for someone else... I think I'll savor this self-pity. Not too often you come upon an excuse for it... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Twill be done by tomorrow and in your e-mail. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
So sorry *Hugs* ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ditto the *hugs* oh, and PS- If you want bitterness, you've certainly caught the attention of the right poet! LOL DE! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
my heart goes out to you Lorelei.....many HUGS sent your way ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I sincerely hope you recover your heart soon and find someone not only worthy of your love by willing to return it. [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Lorelei Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23Philadelphia, PA |
Thank you all, I have been to hell and back tonight. (especially since I know he is with another woman right now) He left me because he made plans with her to go over her house this weekend, and i would've never known unless my friend told me he was going. He thought I wouldn't believe her, but I do. He's never told me the truth. And as to him leaving me for another man, it's not true, but he is gay, he's just "in the closet," but I feel leaving me for another woman is worse. I mean what does she have that I don't? What do alot women have but not me? Self-esteem? But if these girls are with him, it's cause they can't find a good man, and are settling for someone who will treat them like dirt. He had the chance at me, and he lost it. My wonderful self will go elsewhere. Well, maybe I'm not wonderful, but nobody's perfect. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lorelei sorry to hear that. But if he treats them like dirt, than you're better off without him. May someone who will treat well and respectful take his place. I like your attitude there. Good way to look at it! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Death to him-or is it too good for the guy?  ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Lorelei Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23Philadelphia, PA |
Thank you, all. I think I would rather see him suffer. Maybe one day, he'll look in the mirror and see that he's not as perfect as he thinks and that he has hurt me, when he always said he never wanted to hurt anyone. But death would be too good for him. I am a firm believer in the three-fold law, and boy, will he get it back. [This message has been edited by Lorelei (edited 10-03-1999).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You go, woman! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I always say...what comes 'round goes 'round. find peace in that. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Do not fret... Karma will find him in her sights. Sounds like he is unable to be true to himself... and until such time he'll never be true to anyone else. You're lucky to have found out now rather than several years down the road. Sorry for the pain of today, just don't let in jade you to a bitter end. As for the poem... really liked the first stanza. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
So Sorry to hear thwe situation. perhaps one day, fate will arrange a revenge for him......perhaops when he is outr of the closet, one of his boyfriends will leave him for a woman  Seriously though I think we are all meant for something, and this is fate's way of saying you are not meant for him. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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