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Missing You
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Missing You |
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Rico Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 20 |
when words don't add up to a sum when you can't express what's there when you feel what's inside won't come when you forget and begin to stare the words will come in an instant when your heart's gate is open and you think about the only constant what you feel is only spoken then the other can feel sincerity knowing you're true inside the core you're hearts message becomes clarity the gate opens and you start to pour the cup runs over with your feelings they drink and are touched by the same no more empty thoughts or ramblings but expression igniting many flames my heart is full my feelings many my gate now opened expression: I miss you |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
This is lovely! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is a beautiful and unique interpretation of missing someone. I hope you don't have to wait long. |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
the sentiments feel familiar,very good |
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