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Rico
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since 1999-10-29
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-10-29 01:15 AM


when words don't add up to a sum
when you can't express what's there
when you feel what's inside won't come
when you forget and begin to stare

the words will come in an instant
when your heart's gate is open
and you think about the only constant
what you feel is only spoken

then the other can feel sincerity
knowing you're true inside the core
you're hearts message becomes clarity
the gate opens and you start to pour

the cup runs over with your feelings
they drink and are touched by the same
no more empty thoughts or ramblings
but expression igniting many flames

my heart is full
my feelings many
my gate now opened
expression: I miss you

© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-29 01:32 AM


This is lovely! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

devina
Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 1999-10-29 03:48 PM


This is a beautiful and unique interpretation of missing someone. I hope you don't have to wait long.
Patrick B
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 58
uk
3 posted 1999-10-29 03:52 PM


the sentiments feel familiar,very good
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