Open Poetry #3 |
A Precious Holiday Memory for Mummy |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It was holiday time for us this week, My little son was filled with excitement and joy, So much to experience and look forward to, A big adventure for my little boy. He'd been saving all his money, To buy himself some nice things, And he surprised the hell out of me, Wanting to buy Mummy a necklace or a ring. I said how much I loved him, And thanked him for his generosity, But perhaps he should buy himself some presents first, And if he has any change left then we'd see. Dylan bought himself a snow globe, And a toy fishing set as well, He felt it was money well spent, And then poor lamb, his little face fell. Did he have enough change left, To buy a little present for me? He was quite worried about it, He wanted to share his good fortune with me. We went into a gift shop, And he saw what he wanted right away, A little blue gemstone dolphin, Would he have enough to pay? We counted out his money, He had enough and a little more, So he proudly bought me my necklace, From the gift store. He was so ernest and proud of himself, Couldn't wait for me to put it on, I told him how beautiful it was, And thanked him for being such a thoughtful son. Twas only a little thing, This dolphin on a chain, But with it and all the love that goes with it, Some beautiful memories remain. ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 10-29-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Awwww thats so sweet! Loved this story. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This certainly is precious, Isis! What a little joy he is! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It was no little thing at all. Wonderful story. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Balladeer I don't think it was little either, I think it was precious! My heart melted. Thanks also Denise, HootOwl and Watcher - more a story than a poem |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
true life stories melt the heartstrings. Thanks for sharing. What a gift you have in your son. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
So sweet my teeth hurt. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Isis...soul sister...This touched my heart. I have a necklace from my children that is worth so much more then money. Thankyou for sharing this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How your heart must swell with love and pride when you look at that necklace bought with a child's love... I'd say it was worth more than diamonds!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Sunshine I think he's such a gift, you are spot on. Thanks RSE glad you liked it Thanks 'soul sister' Marilyn, I have thought that about you a few times recently too! We think alike and feel alike in many ways I think. I'd love to get to know you on a more personal basis. Email or Icq me please? And Suthern you're right, that necklace is worth a whole lot more than diamonds. ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Cast your soul to the sea, When the dark nights seem endless, Please remember me. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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