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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-10-28 02:18 PM


“True Wealth”

I wish I had a dollar for every bronc I rode-
I’d settle for a nickel for the times that I’ve been throwed,
If I merely had a penny for the miles my eyes have scanned,
Bill Gates would go on welfare, and I’d be a wealthy man.

If heartaches went for dollars, and tears would bring in gold-
And I’d got paid for all the nights, I slept out in the cold.
If shattered dreams where banknotes, then be assured my friend-
That I would want for nothing, and I’d be a wealthy man.

Oh, if wealth were only measured, by the scars which I’ve acquired-
And the times my mouth and temper have conspired to get me fired.
And I was just rewarded for my “riding for the brand”-
I’d have more dough than Ross Perot, I’d be a wealthy man.

But wealth cannot be measured, by money in the bank-
Nor fleeting, foolish pleasure, nor riding broncs that’s rank...
If you’d convert to currency the places I have been-
I guess that I would rate among the world’s most wealthy men.

© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-28 02:38 PM


How nice...I really like your work, Gunslinger.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-10-28 05:04 PM


You called the shots right in this one, GS. Ya don't find true wealth in your bank statement....only in your life statement.
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-10-28 07:19 PM


If you had a penny for each smile that you have given.
Each soul you've touch, each tear once dried, each friend forgiven.
You'd have more worth then you could count, immortality.

For each one that you have loved, most freely from your heart.
Will pass along the joy they felt, completely from the start.
Bless the ones that touch your life, hold fast with what you know.
For in the end, rememberance is what we have to show.

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Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
4 posted 1999-10-28 08:04 PM


I echo Balladeer...also would like to say your rhyme scheme is such a delight to read.
Another great one.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-28 09:00 PM


Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-10-28 09:11 PM


Man Gs, you wouldn't be a bronc buster by chance would you? Another fine read
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-10-28 10:38 PM


This one is most excellent! What a powerful message! Loved it!

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Denise


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