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Open Poetry #3

The Cherry tree

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

0 posted 1999-10-28 01:51 PM

Should we meet by the cherry tree?
I need to claim you my love,don't you see?
Under the bluest sky let your lips touch mine,
make me tremble make me shine,
Should we wait for the birds to sing?
Or be carried away by anglel's wing?
Let the blossom rain down like snow,
like the tears of love,let you know,
Listen to the stream play our song,
It sighs our tune,endlessly long,
Should we watch the butterfly?
Beautiful and graceful it spirals the sky,
So much beauty surrounds me,
Yet it's only you I can see.

[This message has been edited by Patrick B (edited 10-28-1999).]

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 1999-10-28 02:03 PM

Well done.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-28 08:08 PM

Liked this much! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-28 08:33 PM

I like this, well written

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-30 08:36 PM

Beautiful, Patrick! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

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