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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Barely edible Undigestible Far from tranquil My words are lost in an effortless... kamikaze mission to the moon... The moon, a place of sterility Engulfs...Swallows...Digests Yes, IT digests my words, but no one No one Hears my importance... ------------------ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, this is actually a really powerful little piece ! I believe it deserves to go back to the top!! Short is often so very sweet...  ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Definately powerful words brandon. I think this deserves to go back to the top as well. I am not sure if I have said this before....Welcome to Passions. I am sorry if this is a little late...  |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Brandon, I too welcome you to Passions. Don't think for a minute your words aren't heard or digested...I've been reading a lot of your stuff, I apologize I have just now replied but will do better in the future. I think you are a profoundly deep thinker and have great insight...and this piece is evidence of that...I look forward to seeing your postings in all forums... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Your words are heard and enjoyed! Liked this one. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions. This is well stated, I really enjoyed it. |
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