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what is lost in me
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what is lost in me |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
inside the circle of your arms I feel protected and loved you are my safe place to be. a wondrous creation this realm of energy and warmth wherein I regain what is lost in me. my face buried deep in the beating of your heart, breathing as one, your strength renews me. what amazes and saddens me too, I must say, is that this you do from miles away. how could I have known that the puzzle pieces of me scattered by this race we call humanity would all be waiting safely inside the circle of your arms? ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 10-28-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This makes me sigh, Lovey... those miles between the pieces of the whole are tough. Well done!!! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well join my sighs with yours.....thanks suthern  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Can a Rainbow add her sighs to yours?.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, *sigh* sure can and hugs are welcome too! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, try this on for sighs...me, too! The emotion is beautiful. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno?....I'd love to try to get "lost" IN you!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno... as soon as I saw the title, I immediately thought of Toe. *G* I bet you planned it that way, didn't you, ya sneaky O&O????? Don't think I'm not watching closely... (baseball bat swinging back and forth, foot tapping) *G* |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep Balladeer, join in the sighs, seems they abound lately, thanks for the compliment and toe, I am not sure I that's exactly what my poem was trying to say, but I do like your sentiment and suthern, hey I am not worried, am pretty quick on my feet....lol and I *never* thought of that with the title, lol, shows where your mind is huh? |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
K, from what I hear, it's easy for Toe to get lost....poor little feller. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG@poor little feller....you two crack me up |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply lovely..*sighs* ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
can I join the crowd and *sigh* too ? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Me too, me too! I want to *sigh* as well. Lovely piece ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful piece of writing, lloveit! I enjoyed it very much! ------------------ Denise |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks all, am sorry to make you all sigh so much *s* but yes all here know this feeling all too well.... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You get a BIG sigh from me. Wonderful emotions you have written here! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Another big *sigh* to add to the list...beautiful beautiful work... ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
A perfect illustration of why this board is called Passions ... Great one lovey ! ... ps : I really tried but couldn't find any typo *g* |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
JTF lolol@typo, and you do notice it has been edited? I almost left you one, but fixed it instead *g* hugs, good to see you back thanks Alwye and Whtdove glad you liked it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where have you gone? |
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