Open Poetry #3 |
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Here I am; |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
I cannot be saved I don't want it anyway fall, falling away... laughing as I dance and play it's hard to care ...when I lost myself today.. gone, gone away When I lie, lye in the garden cold and grey.. the singing of perfection within. lost within, lost to stay.. I am left again today.. Solitude... could it be a phase? changed within, will it stay? I don't know but it is time to create That new me... who I must be today.... Edward A. Beerman, 8-31-97 |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read. Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your writing is deep in some of the unholier emotions...truly enjoyable to a creature of the Dark such as I. Good work. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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