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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-10-28 01:21 AM


I cannot be saved
I don't want it anyway
fall, falling away...
laughing as I dance and play
it's hard to care
...when I lost myself today..
gone, gone away

When I lie,
lye in the garden cold and grey..
the singing of perfection within.
lost within,
lost to stay..
I am left again today..

Solitude...
could it be a phase?
changed within,
will it stay?
I don't know but it is time to create
That new me... who I must be today....

Edward A. Beerman,
8-31-97

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-28 01:29 AM


Enjoyed the read. Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-10-28 07:31 AM


Your writing is deep in some of the unholier emotions...truly enjoyable to a creature of the Dark such as I. Good work.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



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