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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-01 10:25 PM


The mind rotting idiot box
Teaches us our principles
No one else to show us right from worng
We learn from sitcoms and soaps
Thats life
But don't blame TV,
Or music, or books
For the childrens decay of morality
Blame yourself for not being there

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-01 10:29 PM


Great message, so true in todays society
roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
2 posted 1999-10-02 12:01 PM


this is great... i was having these same thoughts tonight. i was jumping on a trampoline with some kids half my age and one of them said "my daddy never asked for kisses. all he ever said was 'go to your room!!' I grew up in my room." it was really depressing and i thought that if maybe someone else had ever taken the time to talk to these kids and jump on trmapolines with them, they would be a little happier and wouldn't say such things about their father. thanks for the beautiful reply to my challenge

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-10-02 02:17 AM


poigniant SD.......very good work.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-16 08:13 PM


A message to be heeded! They are OUR responsibility!

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Denise

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