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My angel
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My angel |
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Punk New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 3 |
Your heart should hold me in its arms, Your heart should hold me tight. I have found the love that so perfect for me but seems so out of sight. A distance away from what is so true, From all that i want to know. I want to know whats inside of you, I want to hold you and never let go. You seem like an angel thats sent from above, To rescue from this impossible life. A life thats impossible without ur love, A life thats impossible without your guiding light. So come now almighty angel and take me away from this place! Hold me close to you, Please keep me safe. Safe from whatever lies ahead, Safe from the hurt that i dread. So come my angel, come, and rescue me from this place. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A sweet expression of longing. Welcome to Passions, Punk! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions Punk! LOVE the untold longing in this piece  ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So full of feeling, I enjoyed it very much and yes, welcome to Passions ! : ) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
This seems really heartfelt, good job! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very heartfelt and full of emotion, Punk..you're a welcome addition to our Passions family!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Touching and heartfelt! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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