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Open Poetry #3

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brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 1999-10-27 12:31 PM

A Queen
Regal
In a sable barn
Not in her true place,
but in a true place, nonetheless
........

Someone interested in my "on-the-spot" poem?
PLEASE! Talk to me. I can't find anyone interested in my poetry, they say it's too different.

Lovingly,
Brandon Dinsmore

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-27 01:54 PM

And what is wrong with different? Liked this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-27 06:41 PM

short, sweet, and not a wasted word amoung them

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

3 posted 1999-10-27 07:35 PM

I love this poem! It speaks of great things in only 5 lines! I myself "try" to write the same types of poems but i get stuck with the "typical format" but inspite of what other people think...I LOVED IT!!! keep it up!

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 1999-10-28 12:37 PM

YOUR POEM IS EASY TO UNDERSTAND, BUT NEEDS MORE DETAILS. I CAN STILL RELATE.

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