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Haskins
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0 posted 1999-10-01 09:36 PM


as the tide of dawn
crept across the face of the earth
and brought morning, in turn,
to all nations,
there appeared— in every
village, town, and city square—
an indecipherable symbol,
wrought from a material
that no man could name.

and the people emerged
from their homes and their churches,
their offices and schools,
an ocean of faces,
gazing in wonder
at the symbol unknown;
each of them desperate
to call it his own.

christian
muslim
hindu
jew

fascist
racist
atheist

occultist
buddhist
scientist

capitalist
and communist

stepped up to
claim his destiny,

and couldn’t murder
fast enough

William Haskins http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm


[This message has been edited by Haskins (edited 10-01-1999).]

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Nan
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1 posted 1999-10-01 09:53 PM


Hey Haskins - Nice to hear from ya...
...with yet another mind bender...

doreen peri
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2 posted 1999-10-02 01:19 PM


WOW!!!!

Thought provoking, well constructed! Excellent!

Mike
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3 posted 1999-10-02 03:15 PM


impressive effort.
Denise
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4 posted 1999-10-04 10:08 PM


Impressive, indeed!

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Denise

Skyfyre
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5 posted 1999-10-04 10:37 PM


Ouch ... this one hurt ...

Chilling thought ... that when we finally all come together it will be to ensure our mutual destruction ...

This was a WOW!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")



Poet deVine
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6 posted 1999-10-06 11:32 AM


Nice to 'read' you again. We destroy what we don't understand...yes...an excellent parable.
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 1999-10-06 11:46 AM


Haskin - nicely put - it does seem we are all too eager to claim ownership to the keys, and take from others what is freely given to all as a way of proving our authority of righteousness. History speaks well of what you suggest.
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