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sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33


0 posted 1999-10-25 11:07 PM


Perfect Love

Slivering kindness
momentarily mindless
lost in the rush
of a young man's crush

Withering roses
as old as Moses
the best to be found
in this old poor town

unsuspecting mistress
accepting his kisses
she knew of his existence
because of his persistence

Now they are married
and rich as fairies
hearts pure as gold
they both had broke the mold


This is an old one as well, I've always thought it was kinda goofy, but I always get comments on it for some reason.

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

© Copyright 1999 sparrow - All Rights Reserved
thursdayschild
Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-10-25 11:28 PM


Sweet!

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-26 04:31 AM


Cute! Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-26 07:40 AM


This is lovley Sparrow

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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