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The clime of time
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The clime of time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The clime of time June of nineteen forty two That is when she came to view. Not to my eyes but to my heart, With just a tweak a twinge to start. She smiled a fatal smile at me That touched the edge of flattery And I was smitten overall, Almost completely I recall. When we touched the magic flared It blossomed to a full declare. And I was stopped in awes derail, By the voice of a nightingale. Or so it did appear to me. Eyes of the heart see differently. They see within a new born clime That has nothing to do with time. Years have flowed though I'm not aware And the mirror shows a difference there. But I don't see the mirrors view. For I'm still back in forty two. To me it's always forty two. For that's the way my heart sees you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
True love never grows old, Seymour, a beautiful poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Delightful Seymour...Absolutely delightful! This is how love sees the world. Not in the age that we live but the age of the heart. Very well written my friend. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh my!! Love this one, I do!! Very sweet, very beautiful..... Sigh....Sy ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Seymour this was wonderful and touching! Just as love should be viewed. May your views never grow old! ;o) Loved it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, Seymour!!!  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Really well done Mr. Tabin.....I too liked this!!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sweet! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful Seymour and you picked a great year--my birth year. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful, Sy - simple never. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Seymour, I don't believe anyone could ask for anything more. Very beautiful poem and certainly a precious love. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Your poetry is always worth reading and you never disappoint. This one is as brilliant as the rest or even a touch more so. Well done. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Seymour, most lovely. God bless the two of you. ------------------ Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Brilliantly done, Sir Seymour. I do love to read your poetry You express yourself most beautifully.------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the above my heart felt thanks. You have filled with treasures of my Ivy tower. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nothing to say that hasn't already been said, so I'll just say a simple "good job!" ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lizzy, Your good job means much to me. *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The world needs more men like you, Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, You mean more "yes dears?" LOL |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
So sweet Seymour...your words open to a page like the opening of a fresh rose. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm so glad to see one who has kept his word, and his wife. Well done, and thank you, Sy, for giving the rest of us hope. Now, just print out all of your rules... |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
Posts 67 |
Yes, I said it before, and I'll say it again. You are a true romantic. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, Your making me blush like one, thank you so much. Sunshine, Read An ordinary man and thank you again for your response. Snow, Yes I am a romantic and thank you for the comment. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, I do love this piece, wonderful Seymore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Could not let it dissapear, without a thank you my dear. |
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tempted heart New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 3 |
Beautifully written. Its always or should I say an eternal stay for the heart and soul when a timeless love is found.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tempted Heart, Once again thank you for the read and kind words. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
How come I missed this one ! Glad I found it now, I loved it. : ) |
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