Open Poetry #3 |
Tonight |
DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
TONIGHT Could I ever put to words The joy of your kiss? Have I the right to count the days Between us that we miss? My life I found within your eyes And the smile on your face. I found warmth and love inside your arms In the strength of your embrace. You touch with the hand of an angel. You love with a heart of gold. Could I be the one to listen As the mysteries unfold? For love to thee is sacred, A priceless jewel secretly sought. But love just can't be taken, And true love can't be bought. The magic of my nights with you Will forever burn a light. Within my heart, within my soul, And on my darkest night. I could show you a love to last forever, Just daydreams in the night. But if we can't share a love to last forever, Let us love forever tonight. The Dreaded One |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I always knew the best poets came from Texas. (hee!hee) Welcome to Passions! Lovely poem...so romantic. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I adore the last stanza. Though I am but recently arrived here myself, I welcome you. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful verse.Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nothing to dread here, sweet verse. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Absolutely stunning! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Wonderful poetry Welcome to Passions! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
How beautiful! Perfect! ------------------ Denise |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Have to put in my 2 cents from Texas too (yee-haa Julie!) Wonderful words of love, Dear Dread, truly enjoyed reading this, thanks. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Yes, welcome. You will not be dreaded by me, I loved this poem, the last stanza especially. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well come indeed! Sometimes a night can carry us through the roughest times! Well met dreaded one! |
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