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Open Poetry #3

No I Truly Dont Think So

toocute4u_27
Junior Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

0 posted 1999-10-01 06:29 PM

Is there life after love?
No I truly dont think so,
For since I've lost you my darling my life is dead

Does the heart really go on?
No I truly dont think so,
For my heart is stuck endlessly in the past with you

Will I ever meet another?
No I truly dont think so,
For I threw the key to my heart in the ocean the day you threw it back at me

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-01 11:09 PM

Very sad, but one must go on eventually

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-02 10:48 PM

I can feel your pain....thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-10 03:49 PM

I enjoyed this very much. I liked the repetition of the line 'No I truly don't think so'.

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Denise

toocute4u_27
Junior Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

4 posted 1999-10-10 04:28 PM

thanks everyone for your reply's. Its an honor coming from someone who writes such beautiful poetry.

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