Love Returned (an attempt at an accrostic)

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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-10-23 11:21 PM

Illusions shift within my dreams,
Lilac scented whispers softly fly,
Oceans shimmer with pearl moonbeams,
Veiling the diamoned woven sky.

Entranced within your distant gaze,
Yearning for the touch of your hand,
Once more wishing for sweeter days,
Unbounded peace within utopian lands.

Joy replaced with bittersweet pain,
Enveloped the depths of my tender heart,
Fading away when your love returned again,
Forever we are and shall never be apart.

Well, I tried!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise

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1 posted 1999-10-23 11:30 PM

This is great Krista! Your word selections are so enchanting! And the acrostic - wonderful!

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Denise

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2 posted 1999-10-23 11:31 PM

You did very well! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-10-24 11:05 AM

well done acrostic....great first attempt at one, don't let it be your last

Pepper
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4 posted 1999-10-24 11:11 AM

Lovely Alwye!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Alwye

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In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-10-24 09:02 PM

Thank you all! This is harder than it looks..

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

IsabelleSkye
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6 posted 1999-10-24 09:26 PM

It IS hard! I have been slaving over one for days....and that's a record for me, I am poet who likes to write and post all at once LOL. So indeed this has been a trial. You did great (taking pointers...)
Izzzzzzy

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II

Alwye

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In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-10-25 08:30 PM

I'm also that kind of poet, Izzy..this took me a lot longer, and i see lots of room for improvement on my skills...thanks for your reply!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

caroline
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8 posted 1999-10-25 08:37 PM

Attempt? I see success!

Lovely, Alwye.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 1999-10-26 09:05 PM

Thanks

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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