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Munda
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0 posted 1999-10-23 01:05 PM


Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
whenever I do close my eyes
my heart is there with thee

Your mountains and great forests
of an infinity
Sequoias stand majestically
ancient serenity

What everlasting pleasure
lies in your scenery
the crumbling walls of what once was
beneath a Maple tree

Golden fields of waving grain
whisper a lullaby
the sunset slowly fades away
beyond your endless sky

Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
I feel thou wisphers in my soul
I wish to be with thee

I spot a single red deer
scent danger in the breeze
the slightest noise will make her flee
among your mighty trees

I see your children playing
out on a frozen pond
at snowball fights and slapping pucks
a magic way beyond

Mem’ries of the days gone by
engraved into my soul
return to you I will some day
it’s always been my goal

Canada, oh Canada
what hast thou done with me
thou temptress of my craving heart
I long to be with thee



© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 1999-10-23 01:23 PM


I liked this very much Munda. I have seen Canada and everything your poem described was just as beautiful when I saw it.I got to take another trip by reading the poem.
Thanks

Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-10-23 01:45 PM


Beautiful Imagery! I too have been to Canada you decribe it well!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

deleeme
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3 posted 1999-10-23 02:07 PM


I too have been to Canada, but obviously, from reading this wonderfully pictureque poem, I must have missed alot--thank you for the grand tour!
Denise
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4 posted 1999-10-23 07:02 PM


Yes, Munda, thank you for the trip! I'd love to go there someday myself! Especially after reading this!

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Denise

Marilyn
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5 posted 1999-10-23 08:51 PM


Gosh Munda....you have captured everything I adore about this wonderful country I live in! We welcome you with open arms. I have never been to your country though I want to very badly. My parents were both born in the Netherlands. They return frequently but I have never been blest to travel there. I am first generation Canadian, my motherland being Holland.
Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-10-23 09:09 PM


Truly an excellent poem of an excellent country.
Julie
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7 posted 1999-10-23 09:15 PM


Munda,
I love this as I have said before...beautifully done. One I could read over and over.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal



hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 1999-10-24 11:20 AM


Beautifully done Munda
Pepper
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Southern Florida
9 posted 1999-10-24 12:02 PM


Wonderful imagery Munda!!
I really enjoyed the passion you portrayed for your homeland.......
Beautiful!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Munda
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10 posted 1999-10-24 12:56 PM


Ohme, Watcher, deleeme, Denise, Balladeer, Julie, thank you so much. : )

Hoot: thank YOU ! : )

Marilyn: what a coincidence ! Wanna change places ? LOL, but if you ever need a place to sleep, you're welcome. : )

Pepper: I wish, I wish, I wish ! But it will be some day ! : )

Nan
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11 posted 1999-10-24 06:38 PM


Salut - To you, Munda for expressing yourself so well - and to our wonderful northern neighbors as well...


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-24-1999).]

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
12 posted 1999-10-24 07:13 PM


Munda: Most excellent... both my parents come from North of the border and some 37 years later my mom still carries her green card with those late 50's cateye glasses. I got lots of family in the Great White and have many fond memories of trips taken and summers spent. Thanks for sharing.
Munda
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13 posted 1999-10-26 08:39 PM


AH Nan...I love the flag ! : ) Thanks !
Thank you Andrew and Nan, for your kind words. They mean a lot. : )

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