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PoeticPreacher
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 28
jkljkj

0 posted 1999-10-22 06:01 PM

Title of Poem: I Am

I am loved.
I am hated.
I am joy anticipated.

I am knowledge on
the lips of few.
I am understanding
Which the diligent persue.

I am instruction
To the wise.
I am that which
Fools despise.

I am the way that
Is often rejected.
I am the hedge
Of those protected.

I am the ear that
Will never close.
I am the eye that
Will never doze.

I am strength in
times of adversity.
I am peace in
the midst of tragedy.

I am the crooked
made straight.
I am the reward
of those who wait.

I am the book of Genesis thru Revelation.
I am the only hope of your salvation.

Who am I?
I will tell you, even as I told Moses…
I AM THAT I AM.

Poetic Preacher

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

1 posted 1999-10-22 06:03 PM

Really like this!!! Speaks volumes (no pun intended)

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

zipknee
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 35
Oak Park, IL

2 posted 1999-10-22 06:03 PM

very inspirational and beautiful.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-23 12:24 PM

Amen! This is very well done and, yes, very
inspirational!

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Denise

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 1999-10-23 01:37 AM

Amen! Praise the Lord for your gift of poetry! May he receive the glory!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-10-23 01:41 AM

Awesome piece, Preacher. Loved it.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

6 posted 1999-10-23 01:43 AM

Enjoyed this one immensely. Very simple and straightforward. In all that is, HE is. Blessings on this work.

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THE Webmaster

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-23 04:56 AM

Excellent verse.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

8 posted 1999-10-23 05:10 AM

Very well done. I loved it.

PoeticPreacher
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 28
jkljkj

9 posted 1999-10-23 11:43 AM

Thanks for the critique. I will always appreciate and respect your feelings and honesty.

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