Open Poetry #3 |
Accept...Don't Question |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Please don't question, how I feel. Just accept it, for being real. Hidden motives, have I none, though, it could have, been anyone. I don't know why, it was you, that makes me feel, the way you do. But I don't question, my emotions, I just accept, my devotion. At night, you're with me, in my dreams. That's when I'm most content, it seems. If I could express, myself someway. Then you'd know, what I'm trying to say. But words fail me, none seem right. They're just words on paper, that I write. They have no meaning, they have no fire. They can not relay, my real desire. I want to be, within your world, Some place inside, in which to curl. The smallest corner, of your heart, would be just fine, I'd never depart. No demands, would I ever make, What you'd willingly give, is what I'd take. And if you hearts, too full for me. Then let me be, a sweet memory. So please don't question, how I feel. Just always know, that it's for real. When you're feeling forsaken and blue. Always remember, that I..LOve..you!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loving heartfelt emotions. Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like the way you expressed the emotion. enjoyed it very much. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Lots of emotions in this one. I really loved. I can say, "I know that feeling." ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I agree with the above on this one. Nice display of feelings and emotions. Sometimes ours is not to question why |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Kitty! ------------------ Denise |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
....ooops, sorry! ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-24-1999).] |
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