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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-22 04:58 PM



Please don't question, how I feel.
Just accept it, for being real.
Hidden motives, have I none,
though, it could have, been anyone.

I don't know why, it was you,
that makes me feel, the way you do.
But I don't question, my emotions,
I just accept, my devotion.

At night, you're with me, in my dreams.
That's when I'm most content, it seems.
If I could express, myself someway.
Then you'd know, what I'm trying to say.

But words fail me, none seem right.
They're just words on paper, that I write.
They have no meaning, they have no fire.
They can not relay, my real desire.

I want to be, within your world,
Some place inside, in which to curl.
The smallest corner, of your heart,
would be just fine, I'd never depart.

No demands, would I ever make,
What you'd willingly give, is what I'd take.
And if you hearts, too full for me.
Then let me be, a sweet memory.

So please don't question, how I feel.
Just always know, that it's for real.
When you're feeling forsaken and blue.
Always remember, that I..LOve..you!!

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-22 05:03 PM


Loving heartfelt emotions. Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-10-22 05:29 PM



I like the way you expressed the emotion. enjoyed it very much.

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-10-22 05:30 PM



Lots of emotions in this one. I really loved. I can say, "I know that feeling."

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-10-23 10:23 AM


I agree with the above on this one. Nice display of feelings and emotions. Sometimes ours is not to question why
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 1999-10-24 03:47 PM


Very nice, Kitty!

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Denise

Denise
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6 posted 1999-10-24 03:48 PM


....ooops, sorry!

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Denise


[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-24-1999).]

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