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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Arms entwine Eyes lock Music plays Bodies rock Clothes loosed Bare skin Whispered words Passions within Lips touch Loves high Hands search Breathless sigh Hips meet Time flies Two, one Dreams realized To Tyson, my love and my inspiration ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: 'You lucky devils' springs to mind..*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't know about a title, Hoot... maybe you should just post a warning to take a deep breath cuz you're gonna lose the ability to breathe for a few moments. *G* Well done! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: I see our minds are on the same track...LOL HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiles..thanks Rainbow, was thinking the same myself  Suthern...what a compliment, thank you much!! ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is great! I don't know if the two of you can get through this month, I know were all gonna be in for some grand poetry as each day draws closer. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Warning...Passions Within works for me! Good job, Hoot |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great, hoot. I like "Encounter in Three Quarter Time" but what do I know? That Tyson better not be a chicken! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dreamer....it's going to be a long month I think Sunshine...thanks Balladeer, thanks and a very nice suggestion, really like it ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PHEW! Hoot, this is great,I agree with Suthern. definatley post a warning  Well Done ! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
How about "ENTAGLED BY LOVES'PASSION" just a suggestion! Love the passion expressed here! |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
This one knocks your lights out just thinkin' bout it! How about "Chemical Vibrations" That says alot about your message..Cool! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dark Angel, Romantic Heart and Puffalove, thank you all three for your kind words and suggestions ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
WOW Hoot.....WHEW......I have a suggestion for your title...how about "Loves High" ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pepper.....that's kind of funny, because I was thinking "High On Love'...thanks |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Ruth, WOW! So few words yet so exciting. How do you do it. Always waiting for more. Tyson. |
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chanelle New Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 9canada |
Lots of sensuality in this poem Hoot. Maybe you could call it " A second...An eternity" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tyson...it's quite easy with you as an inspiration chanelle...thanks, nice sugestion |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey ruth, I have an idea for the title. How about- "I'm jealous because you get to meet yours before I get to meet mine." Or is that a little too long??? LOL Well done and I agree with suthern about the loss of bresth. Very powerful collection of words here! You need a disclaimer for those with asthma! LOL Chris |
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fatwah Junior Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 16 |
sunshine, i was actually searchng for one of your poems which michael tells me i spoke ill of. i ws glad to find this one, this is what i look to find. i love the rhyme, the stubbed and short lines i dig your grooves |
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fatwah Junior Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 16 |
sorry hoot, mistook you for sunshine. i dig your grooves |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done Hoot.....Why don't ya name it.. "Dreaming of Tai-Bo"?..... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow Hoot, What an awesome poem - I could almost feel the heat of the passion through the computer screen. I thought of a possible title, though it may seem strange I think it suits it. How about: Electric Tempest |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Wow! Loved this Hoot! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Whew! Ya..I think it's steamy, girl! Ok..ok..a title is what you're searching for, I see. How about.... Passion's Symphony |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughing, not sure where someone drug this up from , but thanks all for the suggestions and the comments  |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This was dizzying! I loved it!! How about "A moment" or "This moment" -- short and sweet, just like the poem? --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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