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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-10-01 04:28 PM

Let there be light, God's first command,
Behold the glory of dawn's first light,
As light of life spreads 'cross the land,
Retreating forces of the night.

Rose and crimson from forth the east,
In splendored hues, dark sky ignite,
Cascading over man and beast,
Comes great white sea; comes dawn's first light.

As waters part; light parts the mist,
Spreading forth from crest to crest,
Each hill and valley soon submissed,
As world from darkness, light does wrest.

Upon us all does shine the light,
Retreating forces from the night.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-10-01 07:25 PM

Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle Grace;
Nocturnal fauna nestles back in ground.
Precursive solar tendrils peer around
Through tatted eyelets in morn's tree-top lace.

Faint blushing tiers of pink and crimson hue
Unfold soft wisps of streaming cirrus cloud.
The meadow's haze of gossamer a shroud
As crystal sheaths submit to glist'ning dew

And cautious sunbeams flicker on the rise.
Clenched petals stretch to welcome dawning's rays;
A valiant beacon bursts forth in full blaze.
The Morning Star now masked by azure skies,

'Til breath of life, that brief eternity
God's sacred Realm embraces only me.
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I know you've read this, Mike - But I couldn't think of any more appropriate response...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-01-1999).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 1999-10-01 07:28 PM

Great expression of ones' faith In God...Amen! I write christian poetry also!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-01 07:43 PM

Exceptional!

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Denise

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-10 03:31 PM

Two beauties here- from Mike and Nan! Another 'go-round is my plan!

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Denise

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