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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-10-22 04:01 AM

A smile
upon the lips
of one
as fair as you
dear Lady
is enough
to make
Nature herself
blush
at the wonder
she has wrought
upon
and within
you

'Tis words
that give
our thought
form
and deed
that gives
worth to thought
and as words
are deeds,
form is worth
My rare form
then
reflects
your worth

Laughter
from a woman
wondrous
as yourself
is reward enough
for all
my travails

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-22 04:03 AM

This poem is wonderful...I think you should write free verse more often.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

2 posted 1999-10-22 07:52 AM

Wow! This is completely beautiful

Great work, as usual.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 1999-10-22 10:02 AM

Ramble on, DE... this is beautiful!

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 1999-10-22 10:04 AM

nice one

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-22 03:03 PM

I love to see your romantic side! Beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 1999-10-22 03:15 PM

Dream keep dreaming your poems! Lovely!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-10-22 06:13 PM

Such a beautiful romantic rambling Dream!
Like very much

Jennifer

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

8 posted 1999-10-22 06:20 PM

I love it when you write so romantically. It's always so beautiful.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 1999-10-22 06:56 PM

Soul-Bro, This is beautiful, Please continue to write more of such. Love your Romantic side too Soul-brother, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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