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No Diamond on Earth
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No Diamond on Earth |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Each letter from you Is a flower pressed in my memory Each kiss from you Devoured as a treasured delicacy Each word from you A note from a soaring song Each hug from you A sanctuary in which to belong All the affection from you More precious than the glittering stars No diamond on Earth Is harder to break than the love that is ours ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- [This message has been edited by Systematic Decay (edited 10-22-1999).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
How beautiful!! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"No diamond on Earth Is harder to break than the love that is ours" very nice  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Romantic and lovely,great poem! |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thank you everyone for taking the time to reply. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
so very nicely put. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Beautiful. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
so lovely Sys..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Truly beautiful.Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Amy sweety I like this one so very much!! Jenny |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amy, this is simply beautiful. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Amy. So sweet! ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully done, Sys, I really enjoyed this one. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You did a wonderful job with this Amy. Bravo! |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thank you everyone for the kind words. It puts a smile on my face to see that my work is so well liked. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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