Open Poetry #3 |
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I don't know what to do |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
So much trapped in my heart, Unable to get out; I'm so afraid to say things; I have so many doubts. The few times I do try To get things off my chest, The most I get is laughed at, And embarressed by the rest. Who is there to talk to? Who will understand? So far I've found not many Willing to lend a hand. So much pain inside me, It's tearing me apart. So much I want to say, How do I ever start? I haven't figured out Where I should begin. But should I take a chance Of letting it out again? The risk is really great; That I already knew. But I don't know if I can... I don't know what to do. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow, Blue-eyed Wanderer such emotion. Liked this very much ![]() Jenny ![]() |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is beautifully written, sometimes we have no choice to go on, no matter how hard it may seem at first |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Yes, you should take the chance of letting it out again, and I hope that you do. Remember I will be on tomorrow (Friday) around the same time to continue our talk ok?? Hopefully you are sleeping now like you wanted! As for the poem, I know exactly what you mean and feel the same way ALL THE TIME myself, but remember like I said, I am always willing to listen and will not 'laugh' as you said most do. Who knows, we might have gone through/be going through similar stuff. Anyways hun, I need to go try and sleep before I have to go to work in the morning I will talk to you later! *huggles* ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
You expressed this beautifully.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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