Open Poetry #3 |
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Dish-Dawg Blues |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon ![]() |
I wrote this for my son who started his very first job as a Denny's dishwasher during the graveyard shift. Needless to say he didn't like it and didn't stay but a month before going on to other employment. Dish-Dawg Blues Goin' to work at 10 pee'em What a time to wake a body up! Same ol' crap in the ol' dish land. Rack 'em, wash 'em, and stack 'em up. I got the dish dawg blues.... Along about 2 it's the drunken crowd And they all want eggs on their plates. Some are rude, crude, obnoxious, and loud. Eggs be a-stickin'..must just be fate. I got the dish dawg blues... Somewhere 'round about 4 I gotta clean the can. My Gawd!!! What a horrible sight!!! So I clean it all up (even where the soap ran) And just pray for the end of the night. I got the dish dawg blues... Right around 6 my work is all done. Floors are swept and mopped to a shine. I pull off my hat and my dirty apron. Then I sit myself down to dine. Just singing the dish dawg blues. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your son is lucky to have you since you understands what its like to have the blues. This was well done--my son has been there, so I know. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 10-21-1999).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Thanks Martie, I'm a cook at the same Denny's and he was just sooooo miserable. Glad he got this other job. At least he's happier. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
LOL, I should give this tomy boyfriend, who always complains about his job... ![]() ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WC, Reads like a good lyric for a song, nice job. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, it truly sings! ![]() ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good one, WildChild. It's one of those jobs everybody should have at least once to learn SO much about humanity! |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Totally agree. I hate washing dishes. Especially at a restruant.!!!!!! I loved the poem! ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Thanks to all of you. I had fun with this one even if it was at my son's expense. Though he got over it. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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