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Open Poetry #3

Good-Night

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-10-21 04:48 AM

Like the old worn quilt, that hangs on the line
That blow's in the breeze, it will dry out in time
Absorbing the sent of the newly cast day
It will cover us gently as we drift away

When the day has ended, comes nights rest
And we lay together in our little nest
With patches of yesterday tenderly sewn
Hand quilted stitches blankets us home

With the fresh smell of daylight
That wraps us in awe
We snuggle together,
with a chill to the bone

But the warmth of the memories
That cradles us tight, and the
passionate kiss when we say good night
Soon heats up the moment
And everything's right
And one last time
We say good-night

©1980 tori

Serraley
Junior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 11
New Zealand

1 posted 1999-10-21 06:29 AM

The most snuggly poem I've ever read - and that's a compliment!

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As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame;
~Gerard Manley Hopkins

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-10-21 10:14 AM

Tori I loved this! It was warm and tender. I really liked how you described this. Excellent job my friend!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-21 10:15 AM

Oh, I did so like this one

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-21 07:40 PM

This is great tori! I loved it!

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-22 12:23 PM

I love snuggling on cold nights! Loved this!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

6 posted 1999-10-22 12:48 PM

Tori Smiles(big grin) at eveyone and thanks them kindly.
You got that right Watcher...!!!
And if its under a nice fresh heavy old quilt. with the one you love~ ahh......need I say more!

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