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Open Poetry #1

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Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

0 posted 1999-07-04 03:20 AM

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[This message has been edited by Kelly (edited 08-22-99).]

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

1 posted 1999-07-05 08:34 PM

It's not too long....it's beautiful just as it is. This poem was very well written and I'm sure you're very proud of it. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing it.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-05 08:50 PM

I think there are a few lines that could still be removed in this poem without changing it's meaning, but over all, it says a lot and the last two line....powerful ending.

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

3 posted 1999-07-06 03:56 AM

Thank you for the kind remarks.

r. baker33
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

4 posted 1999-07-06 02:15 PM

Great poem Kelly,some of the greatest poetry
in the world doesn't come from what we see.
it comes from what we feel,and our own
griefs,and sorrows.some even speak words of
wisdom.

p.s. just wanted to say thanks for the most
recent feedback on the living creation.pat
yourself on the back.you helped inspire it.

r.baker33

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